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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 15, 2011 at 2:00 PM
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Amazing read!!! You really put the icing on the cake. Stand for you Deep!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 10, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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Beautifully expressed Spitfire.
From my experience if you don't go or they don't go, you'll go down with them.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 13, 2010 at 5:21 PM
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Good for you
It's good that you're away from that situation now. You'll be better for the leaving, and most likely more wary next time. We all need learning experiences.
posted by
Gloria48
on August 12, 2010 at 8:02 AM
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You Express yourself so beautifully and clearly....
I must say though it makes it hard for me to read one of your poems to the end as it stirs up feelings within that are difficult for me to feel again. Your words have
moved me. Thank you.
posted by
WaterKat
on August 11, 2010 at 3:11 AM
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Hi, I like how you write. You're very interesting. Thank you.
posted by
sunflowersis
on August 10, 2010 at 11:19 PM
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Reading something more than once is sometimes a very good thing...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 10, 2010 at 10:39 PM
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That was very poignant and I am in agreement that one must go for no good will come of it! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 10, 2010 at 2:40 PM
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Wonderful work, my friend...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 9, 2010 at 5:43 PM
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It's not me
In just a few words you said it all.
posted by
csherloc
on August 8, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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It's not me
In just a few words you said it all.
posted by
csherloc
on August 8, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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& Too much in the way of your relationship love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 8, 2010 at 6:14 AM
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I have been in that situation. I think this poem expresses the sadness well and is beautifully written.
posted by
Amanda__
on August 7, 2010 at 4:19 PM
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Thanks, All.
I know this is sad.
posted by
SpitFire70
on August 7, 2010 at 10:07 AM
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Very Eloquent and revelatory
posted by
BrittWit
on August 7, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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Spitfire
This is well done and exactly what you should do. To remain in a relationship in these two directions is a harm to both parties. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on August 7, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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/sf, it is sad indeed, but totally necessary. Save yourself!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 7, 2010 at 12:45 AM
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This is sad though well written..
posted by
Katray2
on August 6, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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This Evokes a Feeling...
Of deep sadness.
posted by
WaterKat
on August 6, 2010 at 10:41 PM
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