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- Go to always as we were,,,
you write to my heart
I LOVE your words...I love your heart...Sometimes it may look like love has left...but only took a slight detur...the road was blocked but coming around the back side!
posted by
manawar
on August 13, 2010 at 4:30 PM
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beautifully said!
And I agree with the sentiment completely - I write out what I write for the same reason xoxoxoxoxoxoxxo
posted by
lionreign
on August 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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Were
Well it is nice to have lived the dream Simone, although it is always sad to look back at idyllic moments it must be better than sad ones. Nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2010 at 12:36 AM
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Simone
This poem is beautiful..I loved it, thank you for sharing/LBJ
posted by
MsJudy
on August 8, 2010 at 10:09 PM
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How so very nostalgic Sinome, beautiful memories I'm sure. thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on August 8, 2010 at 8:37 PM
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Beautiful and nostalgic! Thanks very much for your kind comment.
posted by
Nita09
on August 8, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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Oh Marta, the imagery you used were so devastating beautiful...candles in broken mirrors, the scent of dreams, dried up rivers remaining a part of the river....just bewitchingly lovely. The loneliness was an acute part of this piece, and yet the revived remembered love that never ages, but lies dormant until found again...we forgot how poetry makes each moment in our lives...timeless. Thank you for the reminder.
posted by
NiteTide
on August 8, 2010 at 5:50 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on August 8, 2010 at 4:47 PM
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Sinome, the relationship goes on and on! Nice poem
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 8, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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This is Absolutely Beautiful !
Gut wrenchingly beautiful...
posted by
WaterKat
on August 8, 2010 at 4:08 PM
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What may be on the surface may not be the case deep down...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 8, 2010 at 2:19 PM
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