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sometimes, living IS dreaming....and when that happens, it doesn't matter that we didn't finish all we set out to do...it matters that we could dream it.  

posted by NiteTide on August 13, 2010 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

that last line
encapsulates my life and heart - beautiful poem dear xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on August 11, 2010 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

Twilight time
True and beautiful..thank you for sharing with us /LBJ

posted by MsJudy on August 11, 2010 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

Absolute Truth you speak in this piece, Marta!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 10, 2010 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

u Joy: Life’s a little loving community love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on August 10, 2010 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Great poetry luv but what happened to the man in the moon?

posted by WileyJohn on August 10, 2010 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely true Sinome, the last few verses and magnificently conveyed. Thanks so much for the visit and that song is really gorgeous..love it too.

posted by shobana on August 10, 2010 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

So very profound and beautiful

posted by skye08 on August 10, 2010 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

I find myself in awe at times of the world around me.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 10, 2010 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

that is how I feel when the humming bird comes to sip the nectar...
I have to remember to breath...so this poem really spoke to me....and darling I loved the words...Queen of the sky...that wonderful full moon.

posted by Kabu on August 10, 2010 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply

Twilight time
Beautifully done.

posted by csherloc on August 10, 2010 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

You still love the moon Simone, well perhaps moonbeams still fall on you. A sweet gentle poem.

posted by C_C_T on August 10, 2010 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome...I forget to breathe too..

posted by aceblade on August 10, 2010 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply