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posted by
mariposa75
on August 14, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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Sinome
m He’s reminded by you love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 14, 2010 at 8:44 AM
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This is without doubt
one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read and my face is damp. I particularly loved the phrase:
you'll understand then, that like river waters ...
some things are always leaving but never gone. Wonderful
posted by
malcolm
on August 14, 2010 at 1:01 AM
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Very nice writing Simone, bare to the soul indeed
posted by
C_C_T
on August 13, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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This was riveting, Marta. What am I to do with you and your lovely poetry? I'm running out of adjectives to use for your words and I'm beginning to feel so redundant! But, what else can I say to something that is beautifully written and can wrench at the heart strings with just a few words? There's nothing I can say. You amaze me!
posted by
NiteTide
on August 13, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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sinome
Very powerful. I love it
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on August 13, 2010 at 9:59 PM
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Your poems as so beautfiul
I can't believe I had missed so many as I went back and read over the past weeks. They always resonant in my heart to my very soul about the wonderful love I miss so much. Many Blessings:)
posted by
skye08
on August 13, 2010 at 7:39 PM
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some day you will...
I liked this poem so much that I had to come back and read it once again.
posted by
2902
on August 13, 2010 at 7:04 PM
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This was just marvelous.......
I thoroughly enjoyed experiencing it!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 13, 2010 at 6:57 PM
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some day
This poem gets at feelings I never hoped to see expressed in words. Very remarkable and memorable love poem! (In the opinion of this admiring reader, the last line is not needed; the next- to-last line is a perfect ending).
posted by
2902
on August 13, 2010 at 5:59 PM
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I think that many of us come to this sort of understanding at some point in our lives or at the very least come to accept it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 13, 2010 at 5:36 PM
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Thank you
posted by
UtahJay
on August 13, 2010 at 4:52 PM
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I almost cried reading this beautiful work of yours, knowing that i do understand, and i believe, we all understand, deep down in our heart
posted by
clarerichard
on August 13, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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