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Re: Deeply true in emotion and imagery; fantastic work!
I thought long and hard about the end...and it just hit me...only forgiveness can make one look back...to then move forward.
posted by
cosy
on August 17, 2010 at 12:23 PM
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Deeply true in emotion and imagery; fantastic work!
And the last sentence is the crowning jewel, so to speak..:)
posted by
Katray2
on August 17, 2010 at 11:02 AM
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Thank you Sam
posted by
cosy
on August 17, 2010 at 9:07 AM
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Awesome conclusion! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 17, 2010 at 7:14 AM
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cosy
T After curiosity’s act, can’t a cat have fun in one of those lives further down the line? BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 17, 2010 at 4:21 AM
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Re: It's actually good to start over with or without same person...
can be scary and thrilling all at once
posted by
cosy
on August 16, 2010 at 10:09 PM
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It's actually good to start over with or without same person...
not speaking from experience really...lol..but, I would like to think if I would get together with a past girlfriend...it would be an awesome event...a lot to catch up on...Nice poem...ace
posted by
aceblade
on August 16, 2010 at 8:35 PM
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Wow!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 16, 2010 at 4:14 PM
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