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hmm..wish I couldnt relate...you said well
posted by
manawar
on August 18, 2010 at 9:09 PM
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I wonder how many signs of us and eloquent words have been taken away from us...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 18, 2010 at 7:20 PM
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W e may be a Nano speck of the Universe...even less...but our feelings
are ours and they are worthwhile.
posted by
Kabu
on August 18, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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I love holding hands walking the beach even today... Beautiful poetry as always.
posted by
Justi
on August 18, 2010 at 7:44 AM
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Footprints in the sand
Yes, certain experiencies leave us temporarily,but hurriedly return to our mindspace after little reminders along the journey of our lives.
posted by
csherloc
on August 18, 2010 at 5:01 AM
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Footprints in the sand...
Very beautiful Simone..very moving..I enjoyed it very much/LBJ
posted by
MsJudy
on August 18, 2010 at 12:09 AM
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Just a gorgeous poem Sinome..very touching. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on August 17, 2010 at 11:35 PM
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Never mind what is washed away Simone, you have the beauty of your true love locked safely away. Sweet poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 17, 2010 at 10:44 PM
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sand again
I went back and counted - the first ten lines paralyzed me. Do you really need more?
posted by
2902
on August 17, 2010 at 9:32 PM
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sand
A truly vivid and wonderful image well-developed! But I wonder if you don't lose something by spelling it out for us so explicitly towards the end. The wonderful energy seemed to leak away a little bit.
posted by
2902
on August 17, 2010 at 9:27 PM
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