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I love the look of the tree outside my window after a rain--so green and waxy looking with clinging drops of water, so refreshed and healthy. I think the birds like it too, for they always sing as if they are thankful
posted by
TAPS.
on August 24, 2010 at 8:17 PM
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This is quite the emotional roller coaster you describe.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 24, 2010 at 5:52 PM
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You have put beauty and sadness side by side and each one makes the other sharper.
posted by
Randir
on August 24, 2010 at 2:04 PM
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Just beautiful... there is nothing else that I can say xxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on August 24, 2010 at 9:04 AM
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Simone, it is so beautiful and so beautifully enters into the
imagination. How poignant for me to read it now so close to the anniversary of Richard's death. And I sit waiting and watching his empty chair wanting to feel his vibration as he promised to return to me but the bed is fine enough.
posted by
skye08
on August 23, 2010 at 11:00 PM
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Hi Simone , it is like Wiley says you could re-post many times and not fail to stir the imagination
posted by
C_C_T
on August 23, 2010 at 10:40 PM
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T6 An expression of love can be without time but you’ll need space eventually sir love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 23, 2010 at 10:12 PM
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"I know that after everything... always something comes, so I sit in the void your absence left where the memory of what was roams, and I wait." Beautiful! The entire poem is very good and inspires me to find the beautiful and let go of the ugly and as you so eloquently said, "wait". Thanks for paying me a visit.
posted by
janey_
on August 23, 2010 at 8:37 PM
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Such a promising poem Sinome and excellently conveyed as always. thank you for stopping by my blog.
posted by
shobana
on August 23, 2010 at 7:09 PM
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Sinome
No matter how many times you post this it is beautiful luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 23, 2010 at 7:09 PM
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