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Very beautiful, and sad. Makes me think of an 84 year old woman I know. I love reading your poetry.
posted by
janey_
on August 27, 2010 at 10:31 PM
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The waiting is the hardest part.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 27, 2010 at 7:03 PM
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Sinome
Sad, and very well expressed! Waiting appears to be part of the human condition...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 27, 2010 at 10:14 AM
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it brings to my mind my days of running the Nursing Home
so many ...just waiting...others feisty and living each day to the best that they could...but those just waiting...saddened my heart.
posted by
Kabu
on August 27, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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Oh my dear lady, this is absolute gold. The imagery, the tone, the scene - all are perfect. Well done! xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on August 27, 2010 at 6:49 AM
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She waits
Nice poem. Only in these times if we don't aim or focus, one can wait forever.
posted by
csherloc
on August 27, 2010 at 4:22 AM
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So reminiscent of Tennyson's poem.
posted by
Nita09
on August 27, 2010 at 2:39 AM
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I think I do understand this poem Simone because it is universal unfortunately. To depict it poetically is some feat
posted by
C_C_T
on August 26, 2010 at 11:41 PM
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Sinome
è Such a lovely wait love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 26, 2010 at 10:06 PM
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