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In the end the deceiver loses
whether it is the ones who tell the lies or the ones who believe them and deceive themselves. It is hard to see who wins unless it is by learning to choose truth.
posted by
Randir
on September 3, 2010 at 11:39 AM
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I can feel the sadness..
When we fall into the sweetness of certain lies, we can't stop hoping for the lies to become truth and it hurts so bad when we realize that they will never be..
.. Beautiful poem..
posted by
orcalion
on September 1, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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The loneliness you speak of is so sad.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 29, 2010 at 12:16 PM
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If we want to believe we do Simone, how nice to feel that sweet innocence again. Of course you were a lovely girl.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 29, 2010 at 7:06 AM
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this was such a beautiful and sad poem, the kind of thing I wish I could write, well done.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 28, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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once upon a time
A very striking and emotional poem!
posted by
2902
on August 28, 2010 at 7:30 PM
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"Beautiful lies" too often are not recognized for what they are, even by the one who utters them.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 28, 2010 at 6:34 PM
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very well done...i enjoyed reading this one....excellent!
posted by
TheLoneWolf
on August 28, 2010 at 5:59 PM
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Sinome
You are one wide awake dreamer that can make me so melancholy with seeing relationships that don't end in togetherness
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 28, 2010 at 5:24 PM
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Sad but so very beautiful so very our dear Simone.
posted by
Kabu
on August 28, 2010 at 5:23 PM
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