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Very thought provoking and descriptive of the ocean.

posted by mariss9 on August 30, 2010 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

I find the ocean to be so soothing. One drop is so tiny when looking at how vast the old ocean is.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 30, 2010 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

Water--such a wonder.  I love the way you think, and write it down for us.

posted by TAPS. on August 30, 2010 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

J Imaginative use of the sense of feeling in your hand love. BC-A, Bills RJLst

posted by BC-A on August 30, 2010 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Oh wonderful!  This poem set of so many trains of thought, bravo! xoxoxoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on August 30, 2010 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

Every thing becomes what one desires it to be. Nicely presented Simone.

posted by C_C_T on August 30, 2010 at 5:25 AM | link to this | reply

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This poem is beautiful and captivating. Nice work.

posted by csherloc on August 30, 2010 at 3:14 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
This one is beautiful the vastness of it all is astounding. That drop may have been around the world again and again.

posted by Justi on August 29, 2010 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply

Oh I loved this poem, so beautifully written.

posted by MsJudy on August 29, 2010 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

when I am sitting there way down under on the other side of the Pacific
I am going to think of this poem, and of you, and blow you a kiss.. from across the waves.

posted by Kabu on August 29, 2010 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Beautiful your dreams are, no drop in the ocean your poetry luv.

posted by WileyJohn on August 29, 2010 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

I spent a year on Okinawa, an island near Japan sitting by the ocean dreaming, I love this one

posted by UtahJay on August 29, 2010 at 6:49 PM | link to this | reply

and it's a good microcosm!

posted by dsm_tchr on August 29, 2010 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

very nice ,,,

posted by Star5_ on August 29, 2010 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply