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Very thought provoking and descriptive of the ocean.
posted by
mariss9
on August 30, 2010 at 9:57 PM
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I find the ocean to be so soothing. One drop is so tiny when looking at how vast the old ocean is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 30, 2010 at 5:53 PM
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Water--such a wonder. I love the way you think, and write it down for us.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 30, 2010 at 4:35 PM
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Sinome
J Imaginative use of the sense of feeling in your hand love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on August 30, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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Oh wonderful! This poem set of so many trains of thought, bravo! xoxoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on August 30, 2010 at 6:08 AM
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Every thing becomes what one desires it to be. Nicely presented Simone.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 30, 2010 at 5:25 AM
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This poem is beautiful and captivating. Nice work.
posted by
csherloc
on August 30, 2010 at 3:14 AM
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Sinome
This one is beautiful the vastness of it all is astounding. That drop may have been around the world again and again.
posted by
Justi
on August 29, 2010 at 10:15 PM
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Oh I loved this poem, so beautifully written.
posted by
MsJudy
on August 29, 2010 at 10:13 PM
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when I am sitting there way down under on the other side of the Pacific
I am going to think of this poem, and of you, and blow you a kiss.. from across the waves.
posted by
Kabu
on August 29, 2010 at 9:51 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful your dreams are, no drop in the ocean your poetry luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 29, 2010 at 7:19 PM
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I spent a year on Okinawa, an island near Japan sitting by the ocean dreaming, I love this one

posted by
UtahJay
on August 29, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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and it's a good microcosm!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on August 29, 2010 at 5:42 PM
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very nice ,,,
posted by
Star5_
on August 29, 2010 at 5:36 PM
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