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I forgot to say that I think this is a memorable poem.
posted by
2902
on September 3, 2010 at 7:56 PM
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what her lover said to her
This touches a tender chord in me. My father's last request when he was dying was a bowl of clam chowder from Drewsen's deli. No fan of ANY kind of soup, I wasn't listening well. I went down and got him some cream of celery. He ate/drank it. Why the hell couldn't I get that straight! Sorry, but you got it right in another context, and here I am filling up.
posted by
2902
on September 3, 2010 at 7:53 PM
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Tears of understanding and
tears of grief and thankful that part of my journey is over and the suffering is no more. It is hard to believe that it has been almost a year already. One more thing to get past and then learn to BE. Many Blessings dear Simone.
posted by
skye08
on September 3, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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Those are words that nobody in love wants to hear!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 3, 2010 at 1:16 PM
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There is no easy way.
But it eases grief, though, when someone else's words remind you that you are not alone.
posted by
Randir
on September 3, 2010 at 11:32 AM
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Very touching.
posted by
Nita09
on September 3, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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Simone
Memories will sustain you and your Love will always be in you soul the nourishment of being together that live forevermore. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on September 3, 2010 at 8:49 AM
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this is beautifully tragic - wonderfully written
posted by
lionreign
on September 3, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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some never get thechance to say goodbye, this was lovely
posted by
spiderfly
on September 3, 2010 at 2:47 AM
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Simone I can feel for you the symptons are painful to both until one slips into into a different world which leaves the stranded survivour to try to reclaim or salvage the most beautifull things in this world.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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going back to familar moments can have a depressing emotion on you
posted by
Lanetay
on September 2, 2010 at 9:39 PM
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That was beautiful.
A last goodbye is not an option for everyone.
What is sad is when death parts lovers, suddenly, violently, when there have been no opportunity for goodbyes, no last "I love you's."
posted by
TAPS.
on September 2, 2010 at 9:22 PM
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Lady that is a crying poem. It is so sad with a beautiful past. Oh my!
posted by
Justi
on September 2, 2010 at 8:28 PM
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