Comments on (No subject)

Go to tales from the murky splurgeAdd a commentGo to (No subject)

Magnificent close! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 3, 2010 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Great Poem
I enjoyed reading your poem..

posted by MsJudy on September 3, 2010 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

ha ha well done cc.  this poem came from me after a conversation with my daughters father who will descend on us this weekend.  thought i would vent my anger so i am all happy and smiley when he delights us with his presence tomorrow.
my little girl has been away all summer and i cant wait to have her back all safe and sound.....

posted by spiderfly on September 3, 2010 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

Now being an idiot it seems to read this as a rebuke to someone who betrayed you lauren.

It drips with emotion and is a remarkably good poem in my opinion. Thank you for posting very unusual. 

posted by C_C_T on September 3, 2010 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Spiderfly
The anticipated thought of expecting is normal the perserverance of a mother is more than nothing it is her right as a MOM. Blessings Fema

posted by fememefeme on September 3, 2010 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

Imagine...al those girls were sold for ambition.....well it was ever so.

posted by Kabu on September 3, 2010 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply