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Very sad poem, seems like when this plague gets you----you are as good as dead.

posted by csherloc on September 5, 2010 at 3:38 AM | link to this | reply

Chilling is such an apt word! But marvelously written! I couldn't help but think of couples who had been together for a long time, and the survivor wanting the very same as your concluding couplet! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 4, 2010 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

spiderfly, chillingly written....
what a horrid thing the Black Death must have been, to see loved ones carted away dead and know that it could well be your turn the next day!  And you've captured the hopelessness and horror very well .....

posted by Rumor on September 4, 2010 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply

Is it safe to come on this page lauren. The black Death, yes it was like that whole villages wiped out and later on with smallpox. I have a tape somewhere with a reference to the disease. A brilliant poem, I wonder what made you write it. None of my business sorry.  

posted by C_C_T on September 4, 2010 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply