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wow, this is amazing!! so vivid and immediate that I want to go listen to him play
posted by
lionreign
on September 6, 2010 at 8:56 AM
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What a vivid picture and insight in words! Thanks very much for your kind comment! Ashish seems more stable; please continue to pray for him.
posted by
Nita09
on September 6, 2010 at 1:28 AM
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nice poem story
posted by
Lanetay
on September 5, 2010 at 10:23 PM
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Sinome
. He’s like an old piano that can’t be played. In his case, they can’t hear his blues love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 5, 2010 at 9:56 PM
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Sinome
That was awesome is all I can say, I felt like I was sitting there listening to him. You have a special gift luv and we love you.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 5, 2010 at 8:09 PM
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I am sorry his beautiful talent is wasted on the unattentative. I am pleased his talent remains even after the abuse and disasterous job he did on his likely badly diabetic body. Thank you for this I can pray for a fat man. God knows who he is.
posted by
Justi
on September 5, 2010 at 7:20 PM
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Wow ~ such a rich visual here Sinome. and I feel badly for the 'fat man' - the piano player and actually this makes me think of many a profession and professional...ah, life is rich and full. This vignette(s) you show here is well written - so much that I could 'see' all the descriptive shadows. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 5, 2010 at 6:34 PM
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the fat ma
p.s. Corncrake posted a "thingy" with his comment on my "Galaxy" poem today. Check it out. It works better than mine did.
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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the fat man
My God! This poem is so full of life and sharp perception and precisely stated verities - and all that good stuff!It was a real treat to read, even the third time. It's like Billy Joel's Piano Man ratcheted up a couple of notches. Keep on writing!
posted by
2902
on September 5, 2010 at 5:55 PM
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I love the revenge...in his head how sad that this does so often happen
posted by
Kabu
on September 5, 2010 at 2:26 PM
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you express lively
posted by
Star5_
on September 5, 2010 at 2:19 PM
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The voices don't always win, there is relief even for musicians, wonderful poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 5, 2010 at 2:11 PM
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The past continues to haunt him...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 5, 2010 at 1:50 PM
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Not bad Simone. No I was joking it really is good so interesting, I must believe that you were there and the poem somehow makes you seem beautiful.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 5, 2010 at 11:54 AM
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