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A wonderful peaceful poem
A wonderful delight
posted by
skye08
on September 10, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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Talk about hitting one's srtide! These last 2 poems are amazing. Since I can only do one thing at a time,I'll talk about this one--if I can. This a full fledged drama, and allegory without being either one of them. Its like a drama in 4 acts, and the timing is beyond breathing.
I'm not held spellbound , but I really like being here, almost weightless. I don't know what perfect is, but this is pretty close!
posted by
jfm32
on September 9, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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gorgeous imagery and analogy, metaphor rich poetry Sinome. At your finest. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 9, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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There is so much to take in and to think about before going to bed.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 9, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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Sinome
w You follow this small topic beautifully love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 9, 2010 at 1:16 PM
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a leaf floats ...
ahh...
posted by
poetjpb
on September 9, 2010 at 11:36 AM
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The wise leaf
A beautiful comparative poem.
posted by
csherloc
on September 9, 2010 at 3:35 AM
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relaxing words
posted by
spiderfly
on September 9, 2010 at 3:31 AM
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Simone
A nice restful poem Simone, sleep easy
posted by
C_C_T
on September 8, 2010 at 11:57 PM
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