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J I find quite a mystery in the imagery, sounds, and emotion of this poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst  

posted by BC-A on September 10, 2010 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Dancing on the beach
forgeting all woes; there could be nothing better.

posted by skye08 on September 10, 2010 at 6:51 PM | link to this | reply

I love how optimistic this poem is.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 10, 2010 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

I will not believe that you will never love again because I see your love in everything you write, I only wish that my heart could fly as freely yours.

posted by UtahJay on September 10, 2010 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

Wow...  this is something special.  It's pure wonder - open, touching and beautiful. thank you xoxoxoxoxoxx

posted by lionreign on September 10, 2010 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Yes Simone sometimes we just have to dream to make things feel right. When one can no longer dream the day just passes through the mind like a glass of water no pain but that's it. The pain is for the other person to bear. Take care

posted by C_C_T on September 9, 2010 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Such a brave, lovely and true poem. God says to his people "I am the God that healith thee." But above and beyond that we never truly die, only our bodies do. The Bible tells us that to be absent in this world is to be present with the Lord. Our Spirit simply passes through a veil into the majesty of heaven. Do you know you are so loved by so many people here on Blogit, far greater is the love of your family and friends and none of that comes close to the Love that Jesus has for you. Be blessed our dear friend. xoxoxoxoxoxo This is your signature on here and many of us use it now xoxoxoxo!

posted by Justi on September 9, 2010 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful stuff, Marta!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on September 9, 2010 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply