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You punch me out with this read!! Real and has depth.

posted by Mystereo on November 15, 2010 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Yet another Haiku on being in love...
You depict the twists and turns of being in love expertly.

posted by 2Philomena on September 20, 2010 at 2:31 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes, it's hard to decide!

posted by mariss9 on September 18, 2010 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

great haiku

posted by _Symphony_ on September 15, 2010 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

Yet another Haiku on being in love
Great poem..true, true

posted by MsJudy on September 14, 2010 at 10:19 PM | link to this | reply

That is the way it goes in my estimation, too! Fine Haiku! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 12, 2010 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

 Great Haiku Straightforward.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on September 11, 2010 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Well done!
 

posted by Katray2 on September 11, 2010 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

I like how you tie them all together.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 11, 2010 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

straightforward

6T Aah an aggressive haiku! Very good love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on September 11, 2010 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Clever Straightforward, I would never go for aggressive or possessive, you have to work harder for acceptance which is better than infatuation. OK I may be wrong.

posted by C_C_T on September 10, 2010 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

SOunds like an old boyfriend of mine :-)  Excellently done!!!!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on September 10, 2010 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply