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posted by
Justi
on September 17, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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This is wonderful, It's so rich and immediate and sincere xoxxoxo
posted by
lionreign
on September 15, 2010 at 5:39 AM
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Sinome
P That will never happen. I wouldn’t forget. It depends who the poem’s directed at. I mean topic. And this is an emotional poem. As I gave an example it makes me feel for the narrator love BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on September 14, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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I wonder how many feel that way.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 14, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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Sinome
A lovely secret tied in the ribbons of your heart beautifully written. That is the way a lady handles an unforgeable episode. xoxoxoxo
posted by
Justi
on September 14, 2010 at 5:16 PM
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Sometimes I feel that love never dies, we just try to disguise our feelings trying to forget what was once so much of us. This is a beautiful poem, and in my mind an example of the power of love.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 14, 2010 at 1:58 PM
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I have a secret
Simone..Beautiful..One could almost feel as if it were themselves in the poem. Well done.
posted by
MsJudy
on September 14, 2010 at 12:57 PM
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Secrets Simone, sweetly written, a nice little twist at the end, I hope forgiven comes into to it as well
posted by
C_C_T
on September 14, 2010 at 11:46 AM
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stunning
it really draws the reader in and keeps them hooked throughout.
posted by
malcolm
on September 14, 2010 at 11:08 AM
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