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What fabulous imagery - it scooped me right up and took me right to that moment, well done sweetie xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on September 22, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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WEll Simone sweet little poem It was very interesting to read what we don't see rules our dreams. Is this a religious suggestion or mystical only wondered, no answer needed.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 21, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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Sinome
R The stage’s set well love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on September 21, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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I find the imagery to be haunting.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 21, 2010 at 8:31 PM
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A very gentle warning of what may come unexpected in life. Love it
posted by
clarerichard
on September 21, 2010 at 8:01 PM
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The darkness helps us to concentrate on what is important to us by blocking out things around us that would capture our attention. Well done!
posted by
TAPS.
on September 21, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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Sinome
You described my mind perfectly when I lay my head down on my pillow. I actually wait;" for it to be dark enough to dream and watch it unfold" and I even wear an eye mask now, more with Kabu away, so I can be involved in that life stage and do that love dance.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 21, 2010 at 6:39 PM
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Sinome --- ah yes, dreams and imaginings --- vague and deep ~ another great poem. I took shots of your full moon again tonight. I could not help it...it calls out ~ Elyse
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posted by
elysianfields
on September 21, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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