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Great read! Nice short and compassion poem deep!

posted by Mystereo on October 5, 2010 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

I've had many dreams that I did not want to end.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 5, 2010 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

Not too shabby...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on October 5, 2010 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Cute lady. Is your name really 'Tinker Belle'?  This was such a sweet poem but I could see TB flying and buzzing about like a lovely butterfly. LOL

posted by Justi on October 5, 2010 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

This is pure enchantment, thank you for sharing it xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on October 5, 2010 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

So enticing Simone you have lovely daydreams, I like it when you write happy 

posted by C_C_T on October 5, 2010 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

dreaming
Been there, done that, never had the words for it!  Remember that song, "Both Sides Now"?

posted by 2902 on October 5, 2010 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply

a bitter sweet awakening......had some of them while I was away from our
wiley one....written here to perfection.

posted by Kabu on October 5, 2010 at 6:03 AM | link to this | reply