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Sinome
Beautifully expressed journey of pain, which you make so real I remember my search for my own soul luv.
W&K
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 11, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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This is truly beautiful Sinome for many reads over and over. Thank you for stopping by and good to read you too.
posted by
shobana
on October 11, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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Quite the extensive reflection this poem is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 11, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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sometimes the past really hampers our growth and our moving on....
this touched my soul and brought a lump to my throat.....so moving so beautifully written.
posted by
Kabu
on October 11, 2010 at 6:53 PM
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Time..
has a mysterious way of dealing with the past.. When you've walked far enough into the future, you can start to see into the past with a new perspective, and you can deal with your past issues with a different approach.. So, don't stop walking forward as you are thinking about your past..
posted by
orcalion
on October 11, 2010 at 10:31 AM
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Sinome, yes, there's a lot back there in the past that a lot
of us have to deal with (its excess baggage dragging us down, discouraging us..we need to cut it loose) before we can move ahead.....I know this spoke to my heart..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 11, 2010 at 9:51 AM
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Sinome, as submissively you run back to your soul, in search --- yes, sometimes its as that ~~~ This is a very very touching poem. Moves my 'soul' and heart ~ Elyse
xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on October 11, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Beautiful, heart rending verse, dear friend. We do need to deal with our pasts before we can move into our futures
posted by
lionreign
on October 11, 2010 at 7:15 AM
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It's okay to go back, but do not dwell on the unpleasant, forgive yourself and relish your joyous moments
posted by
csherloc
on October 11, 2010 at 4:04 AM
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Well Simone I once spent nearly a year going back and back until I was two years old and then the fizz came out of the bottle. I guess something's are too deeply ingrained we know the reason, but it does not solve the problem . Good poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 10, 2010 at 11:00 PM
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You've already been there dear one, life goes forward. It is now and forward, look at the beauty you have and the beauty that will be laid upon that. You need a rest dear one. Beautiful work but tears are dropping on it. xoxoxoxoxoxo
posted by
Justi
on October 10, 2010 at 8:40 PM
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