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Hi Bill, thanks so much.
posted by
shobana
on October 13, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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Touching and lovely Shobana :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 13, 2010 at 2:25 PM
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Childhood brings with it so many questions, I find.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 13, 2010 at 12:23 PM
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Very moving
and a great pleasure to read
posted by
malcolm
on October 13, 2010 at 11:53 AM
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shobana
R A word play into children;s play and melancholy love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 13, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on October 13, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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If it's one child biting another it's usually frustration about something.
Nice. A moment captured.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 13, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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A timely childhood reminder. Depending on the ages of the children, the incident might be totally forgotten.
posted by
csherloc
on October 13, 2010 at 4:36 AM
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Hm Shobana I feel there is a moral in this poem. It has been written well, but carries a haunting reflection of disregard or jealousy. Perhaps I am a sceptic. She should have given him a kick on his shins to learn him the hard way. I am an old misery this morning I have been very annoying to most folk. Sorry
posted by
C_C_T
on October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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How sweet you presented this. It is good to see you back, I have missed you since I returned.
posted by
Justi
on October 12, 2010 at 10:03 PM
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awww this is touching. A bite mark and the sadness of disappointment and wonder. Shobana this is indeed an event captured so well in imagery and feelings. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 12, 2010 at 9:23 PM
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very nice
posted by
Star5_
on October 12, 2010 at 7:35 PM
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