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Trilogy spider and fly................(2)
I came back and read it again ha ha it's really enjoyable.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 26, 2010 at 2:44 PM
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Amazing read!! That was a very interesting read, tight!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 23, 2010 at 5:37 PM
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Spider, I'm blown away by this ~ form and analogy and your style is admired by me, Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 23, 2010 at 9:24 AM
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Trilogy spider and fly................(2)
I really enjoyed that.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 20, 2010 at 4:07 PM
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Both ur name and poem remind me of "Said the spider to the fly"
posted by
Straightforward
on October 20, 2010 at 2:30 AM
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Hi lauren well I have been studying your last two poems and of course the spider must be careful that no one destroys her web again. I feel that you are writing two things at once ok the so called splurge is your refuge. The open door and warm little room are your emotions. I would love to get stuck in your splurge as a gnome with wellingtons , but I am going to have to curb my writing, I thought I might finish a year is nearly up. Probably I will just write occasionally. I have half an acre of garden to keep a bit tidy and several small greenhouses. I do love reading your work however and hope to continue doing so my grass is about nine inches tall, I used to have a man to cut it, but he has to look after an invalid wife so I have to take it on again, I could do with it for compost. Do keep writing
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 12:03 AM
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Wonderfully written poem..one could almost feel themselves there.
posted by
MsJudy
on October 19, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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How awesome, your imagery puts me at the scene! Stupendous! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 19, 2010 at 3:44 PM
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