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Shobana, I adore how you took color and ran with it. This is like an image and in fact, peaceful to me. This is beautifully soft and carries your lovely voice perfectly throughout. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 21, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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I think all poets go through that sort of plight at some time or the other.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 20, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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Written in Blue
Good
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 20, 2010 at 2:20 PM
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Fantastic just perfect need no work it is just grat.Thank you for sharing
posted by
Kabu
on October 20, 2010 at 12:09 PM
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this is really nice, I really liked it
posted by
Lanetay
on October 20, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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This is stunning, one of your best I think, both in content and in it's form - fabulous poem
posted by
lionreign
on October 20, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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That's the way to do it Shobana all you have to do is look through the wall. You are set up for life. I thought she was a bit plump, but you were probably looking at the other girl. Yes you were just chasing your imagination perhaps looking into the future. Very nicely presented. Well done
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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Oh my That was very well done. It stated the cause and then followed with a perfect solution albeit a bit melancholy, but superb nonetheless! Love you my darlin' poetess! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 20, 2010 at 5:37 AM
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Terrific imagery, Shobana! Thanks for your visit! Will mail in detail!
posted by
Nita09
on October 20, 2010 at 3:53 AM
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Written in Blue
The word came and are so true...great poem Shobana!
posted by
MsJudy
on October 19, 2010 at 10:50 PM
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Blue, blue, it is indeed true, shobana
posted by
Straightforward
on October 19, 2010 at 9:58 PM
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