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I got that way years ago, attempting to take flying lessons. After enough dizzing on the landing, I gave it up.
posted by
mariss9
on October 24, 2010 at 8:06 AM
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Can you make the writing bigger?
Good.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 21, 2010 at 5:03 PM
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shobana
. Don’t get too high. Nice poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 21, 2010 at 10:28 AM
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This is fabulous - your poetry is going from strength to strength at the moment and the subject is both clever and wise
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2010 at 8:06 AM
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A half-century ago, "too high" was only a fuzzy CONCEPT!
posted by
northsage_45
on October 21, 2010 at 3:04 AM
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What a fantastic poem my Shobana! You took too high and made it so exquisite! KUDOS all the day long Sweetie! Love you and this poem! Just awesome! Your sam
EXCELLENT, excellent, excellent!!!!!
posted by
sam444
on October 21, 2010 at 1:43 AM
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Now are you on a high Shobana. This was delightfully accomplished I feel once you had the high shelf it just tumbled out. Well done, you could do a low one next. CC how low can you get.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2010 at 11:34 PM
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and now Shobana, I'm thinking how high the moon ... LOL ~ this was delightful - with its twists and turns and creativity, wit and Great!!!!! xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 20, 2010 at 9:52 PM
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to the limit
posted by
eburns111
on October 20, 2010 at 9:49 PM
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Re:
know what you mean lustorlove..lol. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2010 at 9:13 PM
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Re: Shobana
Wiley John - No, I did not. Just got caught up in the poem..lol. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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There is no praise too high for this poem :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 20, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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Tight! I like the creativity you put into this read, great read!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 20, 2010 at 7:42 PM
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too many high people
posted by
Lanetay
on October 20, 2010 at 7:34 PM
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Shobana
Did you stretch too high today luv, for something on the top of that cabinet? Made a great poem luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 20, 2010 at 7:18 PM
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You mix in the abstract with the physical quite well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 20, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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