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I love the personification of the birds...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 27, 2010 at 7:15 PM
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De-lightful Shobana ~ something about the freedom of wings ~ the flight, the freedom and the taking onward with destiny ...this is another one of my faves of yours. It's like seeing your vision with each descriptive and metaphorical lines.
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 27, 2010 at 9:34 AM
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shobana
R A wonderful animism and human philosophy love. ! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 27, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Really good!
posted by
malcolm
on October 27, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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Well Shobana I suppose compared to the universe we all have bird brains compared to a bird we have a lot learn. Well at least to your little birds. Quite nicely written you could have put a few tweet tweets at the end but of course they may sound differently in your country.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 27, 2010 at 6:08 AM
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Thank you Nita for stopping by, glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on October 27, 2010 at 1:46 AM
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A lovely tale Shobana, and thanks for your note! in the mail too!
posted by
Nita09
on October 27, 2010 at 12:50 AM
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Wonderful imagery! I think I might be like one of those birds and take flight as well! It really is an affirmative statement! I was just headed to bed when I saw you had posted! I will be back in the morning, my morning and catch up with the rest of your poems! It has been a tough migraine this time around! Love you dearly and thanks for your visits even though I was unable to get out to see you! Big and lots of love you way too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 26, 2010 at 11:20 PM
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funny how we get wrapped up in others existence, and we say how lucky they are, just remember, there are others looking at us saying the same thing.
posted by
eburns111
on October 26, 2010 at 9:28 PM
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