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Beautiful, sad collection of the future regrets of an uncompromising man.

posted by calia14 on October 31, 2010 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

 Sinome, how is it, that you touch every emotion in me from reading your moving - gorgeous poetry.  I often leave your reads with a look out towards my window.  I ponder and I enjoy the beauty I find.  Yes, inspiring and I'm thankful... Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 30, 2010 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Beautiful, and sure men cry, and oh you are so right with all of it luv.

".....in the mistaken belief that men don't cry,
you will  realize that there are things like my love for you
that get into your heart even if you don't want them to.
Yes , some day you will  understand....."

 

 

 

posted by WileyJohn on October 29, 2010 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Many wait for such a day...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 29, 2010 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  "some things are always leaving but never gone"?  Sweetie that line is absolutely profound and so utterly true that it has left me stunned.  This whole poem is a masterpiece xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on October 29, 2010 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

Some day you will understand...
Very good. I enjoyed it very much.

posted by Cheerygirl on October 29, 2010 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

a great poem, flowing with words that will become a realization

posted by eburns111 on October 29, 2010 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

Knowledge comes to all of us
who wait and who are patient doesn't it? Lovely words as always.

posted by malcolm on October 29, 2010 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Nita09 on October 29, 2010 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem Simone and of course we all hold different forms of love in our mind a kind of warm pink  whispy feelings  which sometimes is enough to just accept and be thankful for.

posted by C_C_T on October 29, 2010 at 12:01 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

T You find this thing called love here love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLs

posted by BC-A on October 28, 2010 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Such lovely words and intensity in this poem Sinome. Loved it and thank you for the visit.

posted by shobana on October 28, 2010 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
So true luv;   "some things exist even if they are not seen"  like love that you write so beautifully about always

posted by WileyJohn on October 28, 2010 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

it would be nice to think that this is true when I remember some moments
fromlong ago but of course Wiley shows me everyday some way how precious our time together is.Sigh!

posted by Kabu on October 28, 2010 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply