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oooh I want to know more...
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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"there is fire to light
to warm up the web"
so there is yet life to the web and warmth for the spin of the silk...this is so full of imagery and analogy. It's deep Spider ~ 
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 31, 2010 at 10:49 AM
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It was a very interesting poem. I did like it apart from '
the spirit was deep in the large black hole' that part was a bit too dark for me... mainly because the poem draws you in but that bit made me want to run out... Nevertheless your poems are very interesting and enjoyable.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 29, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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I am always so intrigued by these poems of yours! Just fabulous story telling in poetic form! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 29, 2010 at 8:50 AM
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I think I get the message lauren perhaps the spirit will find its own way back. You kidding when it means something else
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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nice rhyming of words
posted by
eburns111
on October 29, 2010 at 7:43 AM
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