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The heart that bends easily mends..
posted by
yellowrose55
on November 3, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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Wonderful description
posted by
jfm32
on October 31, 2010 at 5:13 PM
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These are moments well spent together.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 31, 2010 at 3:29 PM
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the little subtle acts of love that mean so much to the ones
who are in love,...and probably nothing to those who are loveless....very touching, shobana..
...
posted by
Rumor
on October 31, 2010 at 3:21 PM
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Lovely words
succinctly constructed I think.
posted by
malcolm
on October 31, 2010 at 11:22 AM
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shobana
" It belongs in this place of poetry love. BC-A, Bill’s R""st
posted by
BC-A
on October 31, 2010 at 11:11 AM
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Shobana, I like how you engaged the reader to 'see' the one's whisper and touch and then how you close with thought - this was like a bloom and then the burst of fullness by the end of the read. So rich - so lovely. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 31, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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very beautiful,
thanks so much for the visit
posted by
Tzippy
on October 31, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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You look at the nice things in life well you ignore the dross there is in beauty in most things Shobana as you know it is the way one looks at them. Never crude always observant I like that way of writing.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 31, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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Lovely poem, very engaging!
posted by
steamfly
on October 31, 2010 at 3:42 AM
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The second stanza was particularly pretty
posted by
Straightforward
on October 31, 2010 at 3:22 AM
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