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I love the darkness surrouding me at night before i close my eyes
posted by
Tzippy
on November 4, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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In The Twilight of a Season
Back to read it again. I do like this one.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 3, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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This is a mind blowing read such depth and reality yet the words are bold but not loud at all. Great read.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 2, 2010 at 6:52 PM
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I liked this a lot ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 2, 2010 at 5:22 PM
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Well quie an amusing poem John, I really think somehow that you are getting too much sleep. In fact instead of burning the candle at both ends you don't bother to light it. I admit I am a fan of yours because it is safer to be on the inside.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 2, 2010 at 7:32 AM
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it is the perfect time to dream, i enjoyed this piece
posted by
spiderfly
on November 2, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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thanks for your comment on
Path of Dust, yes it did end quite abruptly, i was aware of that, lots of my poems end that way, because i never have time to finish what it is i was really writing about. thats why i start in one direction and then it finishes not exactly the way i want it to. it could be a very long story if i didn't cut it short. but i do see your meaning, its very helpful, thanks for noticing
posted by
eburns111
on November 1, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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A new tomorrow is alway inviting! Wonderful imagery, too! And, I liked the cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 1, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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In The Twilight of a Season
Very good it draws you to experience it I liked the noise the fire made to help you experience it aswell. 
Thanks for the Funny Film examples and the joke.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 1, 2010 at 5:42 PM
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sweet dreams and deep thoughts
posted by
eburns111
on November 1, 2010 at 5:28 PM
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Deep thoughts... Excellent work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 1, 2010 at 5:04 PM
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