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Fortunate you had wake up call before anything serious happened. Memory lane can be a strange place, but good to visit.
posted by
mariss9
on November 9, 2010 at 10:54 AM
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powerful --- it brings tears to my eyes, Mystereo ~ passionate - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 8, 2010 at 9:03 PM
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great poem and the very end says it all, the impact of it is wonderful!
posted by
lionreign
on November 8, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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Great one Mysterio :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 7, 2010 at 9:03 PM
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a flashback of the good and the bad, some to remember others we would like to forget
posted by
eburns111
on November 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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Very intriguing mystereo, thanks so much for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on November 7, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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dark and well done!!!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on November 7, 2010 at 5:10 PM
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Baby Mystereo
That comment made by baby Mystereo made me smile ha ha. I'm glad you are enjoying my blog as much as I am enjoying yours. That was huge that grasshopper, I wouldn't want anyone to get a shock like that after experiencing it myself. There are some strange and wacky creatures out there that's for sure.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 7, 2010 at 10:00 AM
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as I read this tale called life, chills began to form up and down
my spine, moments that change a direction of a life are the points we are guided to experience for a higher purpose. You told it simply and powerfully and I was touched.
posted by
Tzippy
on November 7, 2010 at 8:32 AM
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R Suspense at an early age led to a moral now. It’s a poem that grows up as it goes love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 7, 2010 at 12:48 AM
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It is easy to walk the the straight and narrow if one has everything but I can feel for that young person, I wonder how many took the other route. Good poem
posted by
C_C_T
on November 7, 2010 at 12:10 AM
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Vivid childhood memories of events that changed our lives forever..
are God's reminders, best wishes, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 6, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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VISIT
Intersting reading Mystereo.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 6, 2010 at 5:09 AM
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WOW! This was so real and I could feel the fright prior to the accident! The lessons learned in youth make the close all that more compelling! Incredibly engaging imagery! I was glued to every word! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 6, 2010 at 4:28 AM
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