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Re: SCHOOLS OF DEADLY THOUGHT
Elyse . . .
joab
posted by
joab3
on November 13, 2010 at 5:46 AM
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This was meant for CORNCRAKE. joab
posted by
joab3
on November 13, 2010 at 5:44 AM
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If a person didn't want their mind stripped naked, it was tough. If a person could not justify their words, they were ripped apart. joab
posted by
joab3
on November 13, 2010 at 5:42 AM
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Joab, I like this poem. I recall this from earlier (a year back or so) when you had started sharing some of your 58 Venice Beach poetry. I loved it then and wow, do I so adore it more and more, because simply this is relatable --- the reader gets engaged and senses come alive because this breathes life --- this is WRITE ON cool ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 9:03 PM
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Hey I hadn't finished Criticism hurts but if this was 58 or whenever or whatever. It is not always the best that gets applauded, a lot of rubbish sometimes floats and the sharks are fooled. Who really is to say what is better than something entirely different it needs a machine not a human brain. I like this anyway, it is thought provoking.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 10, 2010 at 11:13 AM
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Criticism hurts
posted by
C_C_T
on November 10, 2010 at 10:58 AM
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Re: SCHOOLS OF DEADLY THOUGHT
Then you understood the deliberate humiliation inflicted on the unwary believers who strayed too deep in unfamiliar waters.
posted by
joab3
on November 10, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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O, those iambs can take one into bitter misery, even an unwelcomed lair! Wonderful poem, I could so relate! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 10, 2010 at 6:20 AM
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