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all yours in memory, your own, no one can take that away ever, will never leave

posted by eburns111 on November 17, 2010 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Beautiful, but so full of sadness...

posted by Nautikos on November 17, 2010 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Nita09 on November 16, 2010 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

It was all too brief
Good.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 15, 2010 at 6:33 PM | link to this | reply

It was all too brief
Very poignant and intense thought.

posted by 2Philomena on November 15, 2010 at 3:42 PM | link to this | reply

reflecting back gently on losses because of your poem....well done
Sometimesit is good tolook back but without the anger and too deeply the grief. You are such a special soul.

posted by Kabu on November 15, 2010 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
A gentle reminder of many losses for me luv, well done

posted by WileyJohn on November 15, 2010 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

I love this one, such gentle mourning in it and it is presented with such vivid beauty xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on November 15, 2010 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

R To love and have dreamed love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on November 14, 2010 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

If only we had another moment.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 14, 2010 at 4:02 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely memories Sinome.

posted by shobana on November 14, 2010 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on November 14, 2010 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

Nice...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on November 14, 2010 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

Well articulated feelings of loss
which I am sure will resonate with each of us

posted by malcolm on November 14, 2010 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

 return or unreturn - any loss of love is too brief.  xoxoxo Sinome ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on November 14, 2010 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Ah! Another love poem! Very good!

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on November 14, 2010 at 5:59 AM | link to this | reply

A gentle poem Simone it could be about the loss of anyone.

posted by C_C_T on November 13, 2010 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply