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all yours in memory, your own, no one can take that away ever, will never leave
posted by
eburns111
on November 17, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful, but so full of sadness...

posted by
Nautikos
on November 17, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on November 16, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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It was all too brief
Good.

posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 15, 2010 at 6:33 PM
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It was all too brief
Very poignant and intense thought.
posted by
2Philomena
on November 15, 2010 at 3:42 PM
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reflecting back gently on losses because of your poem....well done
Sometimesit is good tolook back but without the anger and too deeply the grief. You are such a special soul.
posted by
Kabu
on November 15, 2010 at 10:44 AM
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Sinome
A gentle reminder of many losses for me luv, well done
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 15, 2010 at 10:21 AM
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I love this one, such gentle mourning in it and it is presented with such vivid beauty xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on November 15, 2010 at 7:02 AM
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Sinome
R To love and have dreamed love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 14, 2010 at 10:57 PM
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If only we had another moment.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 14, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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Lovely memories Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on November 14, 2010 at 2:54 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on November 14, 2010 at 2:17 PM
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Nice...

posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 14, 2010 at 10:08 AM
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Well articulated feelings of loss
which I am sure will resonate with each of us
posted by
malcolm
on November 14, 2010 at 9:10 AM
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return or unreturn - any loss of love is too brief. xoxoxo Sinome ~

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 14, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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Ah! Another love poem! Very good!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on November 14, 2010 at 5:59 AM
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A gentle poem Simone it could be about the loss of anyone.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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