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posted by
longsam
on December 7, 2010 at 10:51 PM
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Thanks for your stories Mysterio.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 25, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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Wonderful & expressive ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 21, 2010 at 7:30 PM
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The strength & force of the inner self revealed so beautifully in this lovely poem!
posted by
shamasehar
on November 21, 2010 at 6:55 AM
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I am ashamed I don't bring this out in anyone.
posted by
Straightforward
on November 20, 2010 at 9:56 PM
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THis is lovely - I like the imagery and the draw bridge (and I envision a moat as well) - this is powerful and yes, 'inner force' - blessed within, blessed without and now you share blessings. Lovely ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 19, 2010 at 3:34 PM
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This makes me want to know more about this person of which you speak. Inner force is lacking in so many, leaving them wishy-washy and unproductive.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 19, 2010 at 9:36 AM
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It is amazing how the life in others can build us up and carry us although in life we are responsible for ourselves. This is a mystery that I like to read about and gain an understanding of. Thanks for expressing this so well, and in a romantic context.
posted by
mariss9
on November 19, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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Warming and thought provoking, very good indeed
posted by
C_C_T
on November 18, 2010 at 11:13 PM
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Mysterio
ZR I love the overwhelming friend love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 18, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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Very lovely poem..I think the inner force is a force to be reckoned with.
posted by
shobana
on November 18, 2010 at 8:44 PM
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great poem of beauty and grace
posted by
Tzippy
on November 18, 2010 at 5:40 PM
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beautiful, and i'm sure your heart is like a castle, big and eccentric
posted by
eburns111
on November 18, 2010 at 5:17 PM
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INNER FORCE
Enjoyable read. I do enjoy your poetry Mystereo. Thanks for your comments and stories.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 18, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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What a dynamic poem! I loved the correlations, too! Well done in all aspects! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 18, 2010 at 4:01 PM
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