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I am not a diamond person Zirconia is ok with me
posted by
Lanetay
on November 25, 2010 at 9:26 AM
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A diamond, like a twinkling star, it's just precious as can be! I like it that it entertains feeling special, we all need that from time to time with a diamond of our choosing, too! Wonderful, uplifting poem! Sending more and more love your way my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on November 25, 2010 at 2:41 AM
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I am loving the romantic nerve you strike with this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 24, 2010 at 2:07 PM
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Shobana, I like your poem. But I'll be objective .. when you're left with diamonds after love has gone .. it's not such a bad thing. 
posted by
dizzilizzi
on November 24, 2010 at 9:48 AM
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"You flicker in the glitter" - I like what corncroak said. Your poetry is a bit of sparkle here at blogit.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 24, 2010 at 9:23 AM
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Lo Shobana you flicker in the glitter in and and out you know the feeling sometimes we have to make our own or believe in it. Interesting poem
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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Shobana
'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all...(Tennyson)...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 23, 2010 at 10:40 PM
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This is it a wonderful great read, what skills, great!!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 23, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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PS: I might be going a little sideways right now, but I'm thinking about the idea of consubstantiation. where the triparts sing in unison and become spirit.
posted by
jfm32
on November 23, 2010 at 6:38 PM
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You write as a srory teller (mostly in 3rd voice/person), and it works well. But for me, I sometimes wonder what would happen if your 2 voices ever collided with themselves to find the third entity. And when you dream, do you hear faint voices? What would happen if the writer in you became herslf. Just a thought.
posted by
jfm32
on November 23, 2010 at 6:29 PM
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SOMETIMES THE BRIGHTEST STAR BURNS OUT QUICKLY
posted by
Kabu
on November 23, 2010 at 5:59 PM
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love stinks
posted by
eburns111
on November 23, 2010 at 5:22 PM
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Someone of a clear, pure heart must shine and glimmer indeed!
posted by
mariss9
on November 23, 2010 at 4:29 PM
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