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Love can do that to a person...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 29, 2010 at 10:23 AM
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shobana, very powerful stuff....
The "insanity of love" is so thought provoking as one ponders it, and your poem captures it very nicely..
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posted by
Rumor
on November 28, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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Shobana
Well done, with an interesting ending - and I take it you have stepped back from the edge...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 28, 2010 at 10:54 AM
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Awwww --- I am so enjoying these tidbits of 'romance' in your poetry. And this is more of Love especially given chocolate? Now that's something to live on the edge for. LOL ~ Shobana, do write on ~ xooxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 28, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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Shobana this is nature that's all, it doesn't want you to be sure of yourself or believe that you can function as a beautiful glowing entity, It picks you up in a whirlwind of latent desires and drops you like an empty chocolate box. Even I could send you some chocolates and I only have one leg to stand on.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 28, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on November 28, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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not everthing you thought he was, nice poem
posted by
eburns111
on November 28, 2010 at 6:29 AM
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LOL, know what you mean lustor..do they do it there too??
posted by
shobana
on November 28, 2010 at 1:49 AM
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Great and amazing read deep content and awesome concept, gracefully written.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 27, 2010 at 10:42 PM
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most hes take us to insanity
posted by
Lanetay
on November 27, 2010 at 10:37 PM
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The close is so perfect! One can get caught up in it all and find themselves on the edge of insanity! This is so creative and very much encompassing experience that so many could/can relate, too! I know it impacted me! And I adored your positive outlook for me! It perked me up a lot and I am in agreement with you! It's just that I get these little annoyances that I think are bigger than they really are, but scary nonetheless! Sending big hugs and my love to you, too, my Shobana! Your poem is wonderful, it is staying with me and I love that in a poem! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on November 27, 2010 at 9:35 PM
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