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I just read several book placed first in the Scottish Highlands and then Colonial North Carolina, high in the mountains.....I could so easily relate this haiku to scenes in both places played out several times.....going into the woods in the early morning.....hunting, or to get water or looking for a private spot.....the exact feel. I wish you wrote these more often....and tried our hand at some different styles.
posted by
Krisles
on February 13, 2011 at 11:35 PM
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A wander through woodsy words
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 13, 2010 at 11:25 AM
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Wolves again? Nice one.
posted by
Justi
on December 8, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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now this is 'cool' --- sorta mysterious. Great one, Naut ~
_ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 1, 2010 at 1:47 PM
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I love this, it brings me to the center of the mystic woods. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on November 30, 2010 at 9:16 PM
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I don't want to go in those woods.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 30, 2010 at 6:23 PM
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Nautikos
#, I’ve seen it Naut. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 30, 2010 at 5:42 PM
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Hi Naut,
I really enjoyed the imagery. You are a talented poet.
posted by
Amanda__
on November 30, 2010 at 11:56 AM
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Imaginative haiku
.. explains why I always feel watched when I'm in the woods.
posted by
dizzilizzi
on November 30, 2010 at 8:29 AM
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Now I like this take on the woods watching! It is a bit eerie, but equally enlightening! I often wonder if you might put your haikus in a book and sell it! I would purchase one! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2010 at 9:28 PM
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i like when your creativity hits the paper.
posted by
Tzippy
on November 29, 2010 at 9:23 PM
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Good really good ..taking doggie for a walk must be geting cooler...
this reads as chilly.
posted by
Kabu
on November 29, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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You made me smile. I really like it.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 29, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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