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This is one poem that makes the whirlwind spin with the right tempo. Excellent poem.
posted by
shobana
on December 27, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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Love it! Love it! Love it!
posted by
longsam
on December 7, 2010 at 10:49 PM
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Just another visit to an inspiring thought.
posted by
mariss9
on December 5, 2010 at 3:50 PM
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How exciting that whirlwind when it happens
even though perhaps but a temporary thing.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 4, 2010 at 4:19 PM
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This is a Fantastic write! Blessed Be
posted by
Nileangel
on December 4, 2010 at 3:50 PM
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This is just lovely mystereo.
posted by
shobana
on December 1, 2010 at 10:32 PM
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Mystereo ~ be blessed. This 'whirls' and simply spins full of bliss - Great write here. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 1, 2010 at 12:50 PM
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Absoultely fine and beautiful. I am happy for the lucky girl!!! 
posted by
mariss9
on December 1, 2010 at 11:31 AM
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Brilliant and innovative images make this a great poem
posted by
lionreign
on December 1, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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Fantastic Imagery
posted by
dougspoetry
on December 1, 2010 at 5:24 AM
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Mysterio
#, It’s felt love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 30, 2010 at 5:38 PM
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YOUR WHIRLWIND
Good imagery. It whips you up with it and moves you along. Good.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 30, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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This is fantastic! Among the great lines in this wonderful poem I was so taken with this:
Words invaded my mind so dearly creating thoughts that couldn’t be spoken. I so know this one! POWERFUL!!! You are so adept at poignant imagery that takes so few lines to create a magnificent scene and the imagery lingers in the reader's mind! Amazing talent! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 30, 2010 at 4:56 AM
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As long as you spin you will be OK lovely poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 30, 2010 at 2:43 AM
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i would like to be cought in that whirlwind
posted by
Tzippy
on November 29, 2010 at 9:17 PM
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What an alliance! I was caught in "Your Whirlwind" too! 
posted by
shamasehar
on November 29, 2010 at 9:13 PM
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