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Come on Mystereo, we need another one of your lovely poems :)
Do you still have your cat?
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 6, 2011 at 2:47 PM
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Thanks for stopping by Mystereo. I was glad to know you were ok. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 5, 2011 at 3:44 PM
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Mystereo we need more of your poetry... HAPPY 2011!
Even after several reads this is still a great poem.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 4, 2011 at 6:39 PM
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Lovely imagery....I'll try to be more frequent in my visits to Blogit again...I've missed reading friends like yourself. Happy New Year!
posted by
Krisles
on January 3, 2011 at 11:53 AM
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You know I have to keep reading what is here until you put up your next one. Happy New Year.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 2, 2011 at 7:53 PM
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ENDLESS DREAM'
Beautiful poem...I so enjoyed reading it.
posted by
MsJudy
on January 2, 2011 at 4:03 PM
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Wasn't sure where this was going at first, and I got confused with a period after each line, which to me means "stop" and look both ways. But if a train ever did this, it would never reach its station. It also gave me the impression of a list of enumeration--something from the outside in ("oh, can I count the ways")--which I had forgoten about because it's been a few decades. But just as I was about to give up, I reached the last lines, I could feel both of us exhaling, and I didnt even know I was holding my breath. Maybe I don't know how to relate to this kind of poem, but I do know something about breathing.
posted by
jfm32
on January 2, 2011 at 11:54 AM
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I have enjoyed your poems this year Mystereo and look forward
to each new one that comes along, whether there are more to come this year I don't know but I hope 2011 will see many, many more.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 29, 2010 at 7:07 PM
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ENDLESS DREAM
Powerful stuff. Very enjoyable. Good.
Hope you and your family had a great Christmas and I hope you all have a very happy New Year.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 27, 2010 at 5:25 PM
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Dreams are what our soul lives for. I really enjoyed your imagery here. Beautiful and sensuously rich. Have a great week as well as a Happy New Year, Mystereo. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 26, 2010 at 5:07 PM
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Like the last line as turn-around into the arrow of becheaching becommingness--as if a thought could contain the secret of its possibilities, and alas, to reach this bittersweet truth of why poetry?
posted by
jfm32
on December 26, 2010 at 12:28 PM
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There's some level of reality in feeling that way. Another fine romantic poem with original, exciting images!! Kudo's to you. 
posted by
mariss9
on December 25, 2010 at 9:32 PM
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Mysterio
TY I’d like to reconcile dreams and reality myself love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on December 25, 2010 at 4:39 PM
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Endless dreams indeed! You paint such a lovely picture and end it with a an amazing turn of events and yet it remains hopeful for dreams do come true! Merry Christmas!!!!!
sam
posted by
sam444
on December 25, 2010 at 11:12 AM
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I hope and believe that your dreams will come true. Beautiful poem
posted by
longsam
on December 24, 2010 at 2:28 AM
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Quite Romantic!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 23, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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AS long as you can dream Sir. Reality doesn't last long sometimes.Nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on December 23, 2010 at 10:42 PM
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An exquisite declaration of love..loved the poem very much.
posted by
shobana
on December 23, 2010 at 10:02 PM
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Dream your dreams and then work to make them come true. Lovely.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 23, 2010 at 9:21 PM
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