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Well how does one live with such loneness only the past has the answer and that is like a flower that blooms freshly at times but remains untouchable.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 29, 2010 at 12:35 PM
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A lonely feeling that is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 29, 2010 at 11:57 AM
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a beloved voice, even if its only in whspers remembered,
can soothe our souls, at least for a short while...very wistful, Sinome, and very touching.
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posted by
Rumor
on December 29, 2010 at 11:50 AM
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That last line makes me really feel the emptiness of that time, I hope that you find beauties and wonders to make it less of a burden sweetie. The poem is (of course) beautiful in its sadness xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on December 29, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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It's those very voices we hear......
this time of year.....The passing of another time/age unit and the birth of a new one. Each event adding to the burden we carry through life.......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on December 29, 2010 at 3:37 AM
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Sinome
Z I love the silence love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on December 29, 2010 at 12:50 AM
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Sad, sweet, empty time...
It needs to be filled with something special, something that will enhance that held sacred to the heart.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 28, 2010 at 10:34 PM
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sweetly sad we have no stars or moon visible tonight as it is overcast
with heavy cloud coverage...but no snow, meloncholoy weather to go with the mood of your poem.
posted by
Kabu
on December 28, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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Very melancholy! It captures the heart.
God bless! 
posted by
dougspoetry
on December 28, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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