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This is a woderful portait of a moment in time within the theme of the passing of things. It's interesting your character says nothing, so he doesn't seem to be a drunk wallowing in the past. That's what makes it more of a painting than a story--and each line a brushstroke.
posted by
jfm32
on January 2, 2011 at 2:11 PM
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Indeed it can be lonely out there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 31, 2010 at 5:48 PM
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I could see a lot of me in this piece, sometimes our past is our shipwreck if we let it be and sometimes no one knows your name but the hand of Provenance that brings you home again. Thank you for your many visits, sometimes they are all it takes to keep an old man blogging. I hope you have a wonderful new year and I will be looking forward to reading more of your touching and thought provoking words.
posted by
UtahJay
on December 31, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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Very good Simone a shame so many characters end up this way. I wish I could down a few pints sometimes.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 31, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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You are so talented
I look forward to reading may more posts like these in 2011
posted by
malcolm
on December 31, 2010 at 6:36 AM
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This is so imagery rich it's deliriously delicious ~ wow, so many inspiring images and thoughts...I love the depth and passion of your writings dear Sinome and may you have a blessedly LOVELY, rich - full of joy, love, warmth and all GOOD this New Year - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 30, 2010 at 10:20 PM
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So many characters pass on without any one caring, history lost forever,
one of G-ds children unloved unwanted gone...yet once upon a time he was a blue eyed heart breaker a man of vigour following his adventures.
You captured all this here for me darling and I love it.
posted by
Kabu
on December 30, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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