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Yes, we shall indeed, Kent. Thank you for reading.
posted by
Raye09
on January 15, 2011 at 2:03 PM
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FARTHER ALONG WE'LL KNOW ALL ABOUT IT.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 15, 2011 at 9:14 AM
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I agree, FSI. Thanks for reading.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 8:36 PM
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I imagine there are mamy feeling lost right now.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 14, 2011 at 6:11 PM
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So hard to understand, but I must believe there is a higher meaning; a better place for angels to grow their wings, surrounded by love pure and perfect.
Thank you for reading, Dear Sam.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 4:34 PM
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I was trying to convey exactly that - glimmers of hope -
I appreciate you see such in the poem, Rumor - hard to fathom, I know, how that can be when our hearts are breaking, but it's apparent in nature constantly, in so many ways: from devastation, destruction, tragedy or just unlovely drudge there is rebirth....
hope...and sometimes the former feeds the latter.
Thank you for visiting.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 4:25 PM
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I thought of the little that was senselessly murdered, very moving poem for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 14, 2011 at 12:49 PM
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dare we say "Spring is right around the corner."?
another 60 days, give or take...then new life takes over...
...you've captured winter's bleakness well here, Raye..and closed by offering us a glimmer of hope..
..
posted by
Rumor
on January 14, 2011 at 12:03 PM
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Re: Pain and grief is always intermingled in life...you captured it all here,
Much appreciated, Ariala.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 5:30 AM
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Thanks so much, ChiffChaff.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 5:29 AM
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Thank you, Dougspoetry.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 5:28 AM
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Re: So much pain and grief in the world
These are the times to ramble and search, Bel. You make perfect sense. Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 5:28 AM
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Re: spring bulbs are just weeks away now.
Indeed they are, Kabu..:) Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 5:26 AM
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Nice to see you, Shobana. Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on January 14, 2011 at 5:26 AM
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Pain and grief is always intermingled in life...you captured it all here,
my dear.
posted by
Ariala
on January 14, 2011 at 4:45 AM
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Ray you seem to be coming back I liked this poem it was direct mixing the mundane with the emotion which of course is how it is. Well done
posted by
C_C_T
on January 13, 2011 at 11:58 PM
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Powerful!
God Bless!
posted by
dougspoetry
on January 13, 2011 at 9:29 PM
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So much pain and grief in the world
and even here in our own little world.
I find myself wanting to scream why? I don't understand where this onslaught of loss came from. All I can do is pray that it has finally been enough...what a strange word, enough. Isn't any amount of pain enough?
I'm rambling.
Lovely words, beautifully stated.
posted by
Bel_
on January 13, 2011 at 8:00 PM
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spring bulbs are just weeks away now.
posted by
Kabu
on January 13, 2011 at 7:44 PM
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Every season has a time and its own story. Great poem Raye.
posted by
shobana
on January 13, 2011 at 7:32 PM
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