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Raye, I could read and re-read this ~ so moving --- I can 'feel' the marble and the tears, warmth and the danse memories and all --- this is beautiful poetry you write ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 18, 2011 at 10:02 PM
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Re: I was gliding with her all the way through :)! - Ash
Thank you most kindly, Dear Ash..
posted by
Raye09
on January 17, 2011 at 7:04 PM
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Thanks so much, Riversidepoet!
posted by
Raye09
on January 17, 2011 at 7:04 PM
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I was gliding with her all the way through :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on January 17, 2011 at 3:01 PM
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A floor of marble atop the castle
must be dried: a tearfall, sweat, passion rules
and magic empowered by eternity's sun
pools
blindly unaware
the clocks have all stopped..
VERY NICE READ, THANKS FOR SHARING
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 17, 2011 at 12:42 PM
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Re: "magic powered by eternity's sun"....
Much appreciated, Rumor!
posted by
Raye09
on January 17, 2011 at 10:34 AM
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"magic powered by eternity's sun"....
only one of many great lines, Raye...has a mystical quality about it mixed with reality's call..
...
posted by
Rumor
on January 17, 2011 at 10:33 AM
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Re: Great stuff
Thank you, Malcolm - nice to hear from you again.
posted by
Raye09
on January 17, 2011 at 8:17 AM
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Great stuff
posted by
malcolm
on January 17, 2011 at 7:36 AM
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Re: I came back to read it again
Great to hear, Tzippy - Thanks so much!
posted by
Raye09
on January 17, 2011 at 6:31 AM
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I came back to read it again
and liked it even more
posted by
Tzippy
on January 17, 2011 at 6:26 AM
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Thank you, TAPS, that is great! I enjoyed the Globes too..:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 17, 2011 at 6:26 AM
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It is so like the way things are for real.
The Golden Globes last night showed us the glamour and the glitz
and the news tells us who has passed on and that
Zaza fades away.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 17, 2011 at 5:45 AM
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Thanks so much, FSI!
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 7:45 PM
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Thank you, Lovelyladymonk..
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 7:45 PM
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Re: I just sort of floated through this like enjoying colours on a canvas.
Thank you so much, Dear Kabu!
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 7:44 PM
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I very much appreciate that, Dear Sam!
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 7:43 PM
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If it happens, then perhaps so, CC..Thanks so much for dropping by..
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 7:43 PM
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Re: Brings to mind period dress and is dream like in quality :)
Nice to see you, Cheerygirl..:) Thanks!
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 5:10 PM
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Very much appreciated, Shobana...
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 5:09 PM
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Re: wow, this was great
Thank you, Tzippy!
posted by
Raye09
on January 16, 2011 at 5:09 PM
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I like the style with which you write this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 16, 2011 at 4:23 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on January 16, 2011 at 1:25 PM
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I just sort of floated through this like enjoying colours on a canvas.
posted by
Kabu
on January 16, 2011 at 12:17 PM
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I liked how the poem could go in many different avenues depending on the reader and circumstances, a universal feel to it! It is a very nice piece that touches on all senses! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 16, 2011 at 12:04 PM
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Interesting Ray one wonders, but then it is inevitable, the solution, well is it a solution
posted by
C_C_T
on January 16, 2011 at 11:29 AM
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Brings to mind period dress and is dream like in quality :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 16, 2011 at 6:58 AM
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Quite a dreamy situation Raye..excellent poem.
posted by
shobana
on January 16, 2011 at 1:46 AM
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wow, this was great
posted by
Tzippy
on January 15, 2011 at 10:11 PM
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