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VERY INTERESTING, MAKES ONE THINK
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 19, 2011 at 10:19 AM
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This is very good! I liked the way things were taken from one side of the fence and placed on the other which made for a bold contrast! It's one of those poems for me where a group could sit down and pick it apart and it would seem endless the avenues to pursue, one leading to another! And then concluding how could that much be in so few words! The poem expands the mind, expanding thought so well done! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 19, 2011 at 2:39 AM
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Okay
posted by
Kabu
on January 18, 2011 at 6:26 PM
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Very original!
posted by
Raye09
on January 18, 2011 at 4:24 PM
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posted by
chris2303
on January 18, 2011 at 3:51 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on January 18, 2011 at 3:46 PM
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