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Sorry I missed your comment, Dear Sam! So glad you enjoyed it; Thank you..
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Raye09
on January 27, 2011 at 9:43 AM
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This one captivated me! It sounds outstanding when read aloud! I could see it and that was very cool for me! It actually took me to my youth and things I had seen, too! BRAVO!!! sam
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sam444
on January 21, 2011 at 8:53 PM
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Thank you so much, FSI!
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 6:18 PM
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Re: I agree with Wiley, Raye..you could never be either boring
I really appreciate that, Rumor!
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 6:04 PM
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Re: a big subject very well tackled......Kudos to you.
Thanks so much, Dear Kabu!
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 5:27 PM
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Indeed I am, CC!..:) Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 5:20 PM
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So true, Dear TAPS - Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 5:19 PM
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Re: Raye09
Aww, Thank you, Dear WileyFriend, it's an insecurity or something I have about my writing at times.
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 4:41 PM
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I say that you are doing a fine job and to keep up the wonderful work!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 20, 2011 at 4:40 PM
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I agree with Wiley, Raye..you could never be either boring
or redundant...a big subject here tackled securely well...
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posted by
Rumor
on January 20, 2011 at 3:49 PM
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a big subject very well tackled......Kudos to you.
posted by
Kabu
on January 20, 2011 at 1:54 PM
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Yes it is the little things that sometimes stir feelings Raye I am pleased that you are able to deal with this theme
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2011 at 1:30 PM
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Emotion--as far as I am concerned it is life personified. Without it, there is really nothing, nothing worth mentioning anyway.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 20, 2011 at 12:05 PM
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Raye09
You borng? Redundant? Impossible
You are pure loving artistry my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 20, 2011 at 10:40 AM
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You're very welcome, Kent and Thank you!
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 10:21 AM
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Most appreciated, Lionreign..
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 10:20 AM
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THANKS FOR TAKING ME ON THIS INTERESTING AND TELLING RIDE.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on January 20, 2011 at 9:43 AM
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This is so vivid and energised! I like this a great deal
posted by
lionreign
on January 20, 2011 at 8:23 AM
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Re: wheels
Thanks so much, Bob!
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 5:54 AM
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Re: Very interesting read :) I liked the orange couch ha ha
Thanks, Cheerygirl, glad you liked!...
posted by
Raye09
on January 20, 2011 at 5:54 AM
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wheels
Boring and redundant? No way! Keen and eloquently observant come a whole lot closer. The faded plastic toys
were an especially fine touch.
posted by
2902
on January 20, 2011 at 4:06 AM
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Very interesting read :) I liked the orange couch ha ha
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 20, 2011 at 3:56 AM
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Quiet humbling, Dear Shobana, coming from one as gifted as yourself..Thank you, Dear Friend.
posted by
Raye09
on January 19, 2011 at 8:59 PM
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Well, I for one think you are one of the most talented here and that was an awesome image that you portrayed to the readers..the ending was just great.
posted by
shobana
on January 19, 2011 at 8:48 PM
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