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Quite a view... from a trails point of view. LOL! This was great.... my dog and I get out on the trail almost everyday, and our adventures out on the trail are endless.l
Such wonderful creative writing.
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yellowrose55
on February 11, 2011 at 5:55 AM
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wow --- all that from 'imagination' ~
--- I have a few of these exercise books...I shall try it again some day. This was vivid and wild and had me re-reading - LOTS of Fun, PR - Ely
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elysianfields
on January 27, 2011 at 10:08 PM
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Yes, indeed, FSI! Glad you liked it and Thank you.
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Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 8:14 PM
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You're welcome and Thank You, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 8:14 PM
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This is a fun read. Quite a relationship going on there in the poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 26, 2011 at 7:11 PM
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Hi Raye, my you were on a roll there - just want to be set free and just be..
Thanks for your delightful comment, and you know what- these days love has many faces and reason..
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shobana
on January 26, 2011 at 7:01 PM
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Re: you got me with this.....I don't like snails at all.lol But how well you
Thank you, Kabu - can't say I'm madly in love with them, lol. I wanted to challenge myself, did research on them even...maybe I have too much free time, hahaha..
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Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 5:42 PM
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Much appreciated, Jfm!
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 5:40 PM
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Re: Fun read :)
Thank you, Cheery!
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 5:39 PM
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They are not the most popular creature; kinda why I was intrigued by them...:) Thanks so much, Utah!
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 5:39 PM
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Re: Raye, very well written and certainly gave me a good laugh...
Glad you enjoyed it, Rumor - Thank you!...
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 5:37 PM
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you got me with this.....I don't like snails at all.lol But how well you
wrote about the snail and into the er private activities even. I so enjoyed this. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on January 26, 2011 at 3:47 PM
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Thuroughly enjoyable
posted by
jfm32
on January 26, 2011 at 3:44 PM
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Fun read :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 26, 2011 at 3:39 PM
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I have often found beauty in a snail trail, but I hate them in my Ivy. Nice exercise.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 26, 2011 at 1:39 PM
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Raye, very well written and certainly gave me a good laugh...
Hmmmm, write a poem from the viewpoint of some other being or entity...have to give that some thought..
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Rumor
on January 26, 2011 at 1:08 PM
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Haha, classic CC!
The sluggish smiles
thank you
for your kindness....:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 12:09 PM
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Yes well I think I will take a miss on the courting ritual but I will refrain from using slug pellets. Perhaps it is easier to toss the snails over the fence. I give up. Several fun poems around today and song thrushes.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 26, 2011 at 12:06 PM
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Re: Very organic and thought provoking...nice. Sometimes exercises take us to
Indeed they can, FreeMan - Thank you!
posted by
Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 11:49 AM
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Very organic and thought provoking...nice. Sometimes exercises take us to
cool places
posted by
FreeManWalking
on January 26, 2011 at 11:32 AM
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Re: We love you no matter who you are! Fun and enjoyable read, Raye!
Aww, Thanks so much, Ariala! Love you guys too!
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Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 9:25 AM
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We love you no matter who you are! Fun and enjoyable read, Raye!
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Ariala
on January 26, 2011 at 9:21 AM
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Glad you liked, Dear Sam..:) I really enjoyed your bench poem; writing this way is fun! Thank you!
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Raye09
on January 26, 2011 at 8:29 AM
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Touché! I love this one! It is fun writing from the point of view of another! Very entertaining! I was right there all the way, too! Splendid, splendid, splendid Dear Raye! I bet this one was a blast to write, too! sam
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sam444
on January 26, 2011 at 8:25 AM
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