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Such passion ~ and the last line :
the sun shines over new hopes, new times
new sighs
delivers a sweet sigh to me ~ Gorgeous, Sinome - xoxoxxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 28, 2011 at 3:18 PM
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posted by
Nita09
on January 28, 2011 at 2:54 AM
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' The sun shines over new hopes...' I like that it lifts at the end.
Quite a picture you paint. :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 27, 2011 at 1:23 PM
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an instant of agony the eternity of time, This is how your poem has come across with all these emotions intact Sinome, Lovely as usual.
posted by
shobana
on January 27, 2011 at 5:07 AM
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where dreams disapear before they are born
that is so profound. I love this poem
I just did an amazing workshop of turning your pains into your dreams, it was so empowering . your poem describes it beautifully except that instead of forgetting the yesterdayear of crushed dreams its more like transforming the crushed hopes of yesterday into the manifestation of a spiritual quest.
great poem!!
posted by
Tzippy
on January 27, 2011 at 1:05 AM
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One has got to be optimistic Simone, sometimes even bad days seem to offer glimmers of hope in retrospect.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 27, 2011 at 12:15 AM
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Sinome
It's always exhilarating to see the sun breaking through the clouds after a storm...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 26, 2011 at 7:23 PM
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Things are looking on the up and up in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 26, 2011 at 7:00 PM
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Sinome
Ahh that rainbow takes away the sadness luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 26, 2011 at 6:20 PM
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I just love the hope at the end of the poem. Wonderful thoughts
of new beginnings.
posted by
Kabu
on January 26, 2011 at 6:13 PM
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