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Re: Short
Thank you, Malcolm..
posted by
Raye09
on January 31, 2011 at 1:43 PM
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Re: Everything has a reason, I guess....
Good point, Straightforward! Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on January 31, 2011 at 1:43 PM
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Short
succinct and successfully conveys your thoughts
posted by
malcolm
on January 31, 2011 at 9:49 AM
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Everything has a reason, I guess....
posted by
Straightforward
on January 31, 2011 at 12:23 AM
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Re: Very well done...so much packed into a few beautiful sentences!
Most appreciated, Ariala...
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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Thank you, FSI...
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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Re: Nice poem :)
Thanks, Ch.G.!
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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Very well done...so much packed into a few beautiful sentences!
posted by
Ariala
on January 30, 2011 at 6:44 PM
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A neat way to portray night.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 30, 2011 at 6:21 PM
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Nice poem :)
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 30, 2011 at 4:28 PM
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Re: Raye09
Thank you, WileyFriend!...
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:16 PM
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Lovely comment, Elyse, Thank you...
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:16 PM
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Re:
Thank you, Dear Sam, so do I..:)
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:15 PM
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Re: Raye, I've read this one through a few times.....
Thank you so much, Rumor...
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:14 PM
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Re: The words are very powerful! - Bob
Much appreciated, Bob..
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:12 PM
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Re:
Thank you, CC!
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:11 PM
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Thank you very much, Dear Shobana..
posted by
Raye09
on January 30, 2011 at 3:11 PM
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Raye09
I loved that with 'heaven hidden in plain view' luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 30, 2011 at 11:07 AM
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I can see a vision of crystalline twinkles from the cosmic, celestial velvet. This shared a vision of warmth and serenity to me. Thank you ~ Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on January 30, 2011 at 8:55 AM
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What a awesome close! I spend many hours awake at night and this was very meaningful for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 30, 2011 at 6:18 AM
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Raye, I've read this one through a few times.....
And it is indeed quietly riveting...a lot said in a few words
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posted by
Rumor
on January 30, 2011 at 6:15 AM
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The words are very powerful! - Bob
posted by
2902
on January 30, 2011 at 2:04 AM
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Interesting Raye loved the last line.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 30, 2011 at 12:35 AM
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The night does hide the heavens between until the morning awakens the glory within. Lovely poem Raye.
posted by
shobana
on January 30, 2011 at 12:18 AM
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Re: short and I think to a point.
Thank you, Kabu..
posted by
Raye09
on January 29, 2011 at 7:41 PM
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short and I think to a point.
posted by
Kabu
on January 29, 2011 at 7:38 PM
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Re:
Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on January 29, 2011 at 7:35 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 29, 2011 at 7:32 PM
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