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The others have pretty much said it all, so I'll just sat it was a trip!
posted by
2902
on October 17, 2011 at 5:32 AM
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I like your writing style - you have diversity and well, you're inspired and inspiring. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 3, 2011 at 6:42 AM
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i am speechless
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on February 27, 2011 at 4:53 PM
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Re: Temple, old kid cargo is getting more old than kid ;-)
posted by
FreeManWalking
on February 27, 2011 at 6:42 AM
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Re: Glad you liked it sam444
posted by
FreeManWalking
on February 27, 2011 at 6:41 AM
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Re: Thanks FormerStudentIntern
posted by
FreeManWalking
on February 27, 2011 at 6:40 AM
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Re: very well said - Tzippy thanks
posted by
FreeManWalking
on February 27, 2011 at 6:40 AM
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Re: jfm32 I agree I could a little more psychological exploration here
posted by
FreeManWalking
on February 27, 2011 at 6:39 AM
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happy happy happy
Love so much seeing your work again. And, I love this! Mornings, coffee, cigarettes and girls = good ole kid cargo ...xo
posted by
Temple
on February 26, 2011 at 9:10 PM
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I like the way you use imagery in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 26, 2011 at 4:34 PM
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POIGNANT! You painted a masterful word picture! I tip my poetic hat to you! Just a fabulous poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 26, 2011 at 4:27 PM
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very well said
posted by
Tzippy
on February 26, 2011 at 8:36 AM
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wonderful line--"experience the flashpight of grey beards"--and perhaps a theme/focus of other poems pursuing more inner thoughts developing beyond the documentary. One thumb up.
posted by
jfm32
on February 26, 2011 at 7:03 AM
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Re: TAPS I can see where that would create a problem...
posted by
FreeManWalking
on February 26, 2011 at 7:02 AM
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Well done and interesting....if it's not your husband doing the babysitting.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 26, 2011 at 7:00 AM
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