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- Go to not flesh nor spirit
VERY MOVING, THANKS FOR SHARING
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 4, 2011 at 7:14 AM
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I came back for another read and I think it gets better every time
posted by
lionreign
on March 4, 2011 at 7:03 AM
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All you need is love ....
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on March 4, 2011 at 2:56 AM
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Just love, Sinome
® Love! BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 3, 2011 at 8:06 PM
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Such a powerful poem Sinome - Well done.
posted by
shobana
on March 3, 2011 at 6:36 PM
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Sinome
Most of your poems are lyrical - this one is dramatic! And it reflects the drama that is life, and our efforts always to snatch a glimmer of hope out of it all...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 3, 2011 at 8:04 AM
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you have unleashed the view from the other side............
but it seems that you do not want to stay there, so you attempt to view it all from the side of love , very interested, very daring and well written. But the power of this poem is from the point of destruction, you could have just left that vision and it still would have been great. It seems that you couldnt let it go without taking a peak from the point of true love.
posted by
Tzippy
on March 3, 2011 at 7:50 AM
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wow this is different from you
posted by
Lanetay
on March 2, 2011 at 11:27 PM
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Correction: Iago is in Othello, not Hamlet.
posted by
jfm32
on March 2, 2011 at 6:06 PM
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Quite an interesting approach to unleash an inner thought upon yourself. Do I hear the voices of a drama? I hear an inner argument about what is and how to be, and the projected idea of a play--not a play, play, but a thought play that could be projected upon a stage.
You already have your Iago (as in Hamlet)and you as the protagonist.A thought play only has to be one act. I'm thinking about Archibal McLeishe's "JB". This was the Job story done on an empty stage with two caracters in dramatic dialouge on a step ladder doing an anologic redition of original story in present time.
Sometimes you really amaze me with your potential of thought and form. Anyway, just a thought.
posted by
jfm32
on March 2, 2011 at 5:14 PM
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I hope that love wins out sooner rather than later.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 2, 2011 at 12:06 PM
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aWESOME INDEED AND i DO BELIEVE THAT WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS IS LOVE.
posted by
Kabu
on March 2, 2011 at 9:30 AM
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This is one of the most powerful poems I have read of yours, and of course as always it is wonderful, but I have always thought that we were spirits that were given flesh so that we could love...perhaps you have changed my mind with this one.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 2, 2011 at 8:20 AM
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this is stunning!!! If you don't mind I would like to print this for a friend to read xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2011 at 8:04 AM
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the voice of reason and beauty resounds here! Awesome!
posted by
Ariala
on March 2, 2011 at 6:03 AM
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